Wednesday 15 September 2021

Sal's Haiku!

rocks become solid, flying up high through the air, then crashes on ground! We have been learning about haikus, it was challenging to count the sylables to fit it into the structure of 5-7-5. It was fun learning a style of poem from another country. When i say Japan what does it make you think of? Stay safe. Ka kite ano bloggers!
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5 comments:

  1. Miss Whysall15 September 2021 at 13:41

    Kia ora Sal, thank you for sharing your poem with us. You have done well to get the syllable count correct. Next time you publish a haiku, set it out so we can clearly see the three lines. Like this:
    Rocks become solid
    flying up high through the air
    then crashes on ground.

    You can be proud of your writing. Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)

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  2. Sarah15 September 2021 at 14:28

    Kia ora Sal, thank you for sharing your haiku poem on your blog. I am glad that you enjoyed learning a style of poetry from a different country. When I think of Japan I think of my trip there and being a passenger in the bullet trains. They travel at speeds between 200 - 320 km per hour. You don't feel like you are going that fast, but things outside the window definitely whizz past. What do you think of when you think of Japan?

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  3. Anonymous20 September 2021 at 11:36

    Hello Sal, I love your Haiku! Maybe you could add a image or something that matches your haiku!
    Bye!!!!

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  4. Anonymous1 October 2021 at 09:23

    Hi buddy.
    I love your haiku because it's interesting and descriptive.
    Also the word that describes japan to me is that city living because
    People live in the city but we don't!
    blog you later

    Sal/buddy.
    Jude

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  5. Anonymous24 November 2021 at 09:59

    Hi Sal Yahya here from room 23. I like you Haiku If next time can you put image.

    BLOG YA LATER

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