Sunday 29 August 2021

sal: do all volcanoes look the same?

this is my do all volcanoes look the same? Where in lock down for another 2 week's and im studying volcanoes still and its been really fun and I have learned alot I really enjoy turning bad sentences into good sentences. What is your favroite volcano? thats it for this blog post. stay safe blog you later. Sal.

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  1. Hi Sal, you have certainly made fantastic sentences in your challenge. I like the way you have compared the firing magma to a tree, clever thinking!!
    One little spelling tip-Firing, when you add ing to fire you drop the e. You could change fireing to firing on slide 2. Thanks Sal

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  2. Morena Sal, thank your for sharing your writing about volcanoes on your slide. I really like your description of the lightning zig-zagging, and you are right it does look like a tree with no leaves on its branches. I also like your Google drawing of lava shooting out of a volcano. What interesting fact have you learned about volcanoes last week?

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